(Since I’m on my iPad I couldn’t get it to copy, so I just took a screenshot)
I didn’t revise this yet, so this is just what I wrote, but I’m hoping to make this into a continuous series
(Since I’m on my iPad I couldn’t get it to copy, so I just took a screenshot)
I didn’t revise this yet, so this is just what I wrote, but I’m hoping to make this into a continuous series
Anyone else here play trumpet???
I just started playing violin and trumpet for instrumental at school
HeyitsBabyKiki That’s cool and no
cactuspot12 Thx
CSeriestechhero I used to play violin... I now play the keyboard or use a drumpad machine
lunamoonlight Cool,i know some clairinet, some piano, some guitar and how to sing where my family says im tonedeaf but my class says im great.
cactuspot12 @CSeriestechhero I am also learning violin for school as well
Twentyonepilotsan I play trombone!
cactuspot12 Trumpet and trombone players have classes together, so the other kid plays trombone
CSeriestechhero wowee cactus
FortnitePlayer I. Used to play it
lunamoonlight I like it, you used really good detail. I recommend a little more dialogue, but its fine for just this bit, it was not exactly e
lunamoonlight It was not exactly needed. You do good for sensory details as
lunamoonlight Well, and that is something i personally struggle with*
cactuspot12 Ty!
cactuspot12 Ik I defiantly don’t use enough dialogue in my writing so I will try to include more if I edit and revise it
Twentyonepilotsan The second I saw dead dog I read for two seconds then stopped
lunamoonlight A'ight. If you ever need, i can colab a bit and help you with dialogue. Dialogue comes naturally for me as long as i have a good sense of who the characters are and how the conversation should go. Sensory details are harder, i dont always think of how something smells or tastes or sounds like. Touch and sight are fine
cactuspot12 @lunamoonlight after school ends for me I am planning on editing this or writing a plot for a couple other stories. Editing this is main priority tho
cactuspot12 Message me if u got ideas