Can any of you guys help me with descriptive writing? My writing always seem bland, I wanna try to make it exciting! Any tips?
FunHeart1010
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Good morning fellow earthlings.
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Queeny Hello hooman!
GemHeart Good morning fellow earthling. May I beam you up to our starship for some Jimmy Dean biscuits?
lunamoonlight I'm gonna go eat a cookie for breakfast since I have a Gacha Life
Happy Mother's Day! Hope you and your mother had. A great day! Today me, Tyler, and my mom went to the zoo today, and we had a great time. After that we all went to Red Lobster for an awesome dinner. Tyler decided to pay for it, which was really nice. Anyway, happy Mother's Day to my G R E A T mom!♥️♥️
GemHeart Thanks! My mum wanted to go see Endgame so that's what we did XD
Er my PaigeeWorld still isn't working..
lunamoonlight same
Queeny Mine isn't either...
FunHeart1010 Hope they fix it.
KnightStar Me too
GemHeart My adblock is messing up as well.
FunHeart1010 Hmmm
GemHeart Add some "ly" words?
FunHeart1010 OK thanks!
Queeny Try to add similies and metaphors, use words that help describe something but don't over do it!
lunamoonlight focus more on details.
FunHeart1010 THX!! :D