Me and my mom going over classes for high school-
Mom (reading off class desc.)- *an SS class that actually seems interesting*
Me- Well mayb-
Mom- ...10-page essay
Me- Nope.
lunamoonlight
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Drawings below. Give me your best criticism, i can take it, just don't be a random hater and say it is bad, or i will ignore you and delete your comment. Try pointing out specific things or area that could use fixing. Im trying to improve so just tell me if something is off.
lunamoonlight Positive comments are also encouraged.
Made with pastels, some Sharpie gel pen which i found out is not the best thing to use on top of pastels (it smeared a lot) and so i got a paper towel and took it off as much as possible and instead i used some black pastel which i hate because it looks like crayon when it isn't blended and it is too wide compared to the pen, which i wish worked. I also wish i had whiteout to use instead of pencil for the flowers.
Kinso Hmm I really really like it. Its beautiful really. But maybe add like an owl in the tree or some more branches instead of some on the one side.
Twentyonepilotsan Who ah
lunamoonlight Alright, i get that. The main reason i didnt add much was because the matierials were hard to work with, but it could have used more details.
CrispyPlop Cool. The fading moonlight is very well designed.
CrispyPlop I would've put a shadow on it, like a bat or something. Or maybe make the tree branches a little more defined, a bit heavier.
This was inspired by Drop Dead Fred a bit with the imaginary friend part. This is one of my old imaginary friends from when i was little. Her name is Rosie. I was not creative at names.
Queeny The top looks pretty good, my only critic would be that her shoulders are just a bit too wide, which makes her head look small in comparison. The bottom is a bit off balance, her legs don't align with her torso which makes it look like she's jutting forward. I made a little armature to show how her body is suppose to look. I suggest in the future to make a light blocky sketch before adding details like clothing, so you can get the anatomy down first. Other than that, I like this drawing a lot! The pose has personality and matches the character well. ^^
lunamoonlight Fair. It's been a while since I've done poses, and my main focus was making her personality show in the pose a bit.
Girl looking at a butterfly
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lunamoonlight Face is too round, eyes needed more detail and highlight, it looks like the Is This A Pigeon meme.
CrispyPlop Lol. Kinda. The neck is just a tad too long, (just a tad) and the left eyeball (her left) shouldn't be cut off like that, it takes a bit of the idea that this is a real person. Then again, I'm a writer, so take everything I say with many handfuls of salt. But really, this is an amazing picture, I couldn't do half as good
lunamoonlight The left eye was supposed to have like a peice of hair over it, but it ended up looking cut off
So earlier i went upstairs and my brothers door was closed and the light was on. I figured my dad was there playing guitar, since my brothers room doubles as the music room. Then i recently realized, my dad has been gone for a few hours. My brother is staying with a friend. My mom and i have been downstairs all day. The light in there is now off and the door is still closed. My room is upstairs and now i am scaredish.
CrispyPlop Uh you should get that checked
lunamoonlight Well, I didn't die or get kidnapped, so me good.'
I just realized, in a week i will have been on KidzNet for 2 years. I joined Halloween of 2018
GemHeart Wowza. I’ll have been here almost 3 or 4 I think?
KnightStar Nuh uh it would be 3 cuz my KS thing has said that ive been here for 2 yrs for awhile now
KnightStar Nuh uh it would be 3 cuz my KS thing has said that ive been here for 2 yrs for awhile now
CrispyPlop I've been on kidznet for about 26 minutes.
lunamoonlight lol
Well, just watched The Mothman Prophecies. Not a bad movie, very eerie though (kinda odd, kinda creepy), i like it. Also watched Drop Dead Fred, i flarfing love it, THIS DUDE SHOULD HAVE BEEN IN HARRY POTTER! (Rik Mayall, who played Drop Dead Fred, was going to be in HP as Peeves until they cut his character. He would have been perfect too...) I love the movie tho, it has a good little message, it is chaotic, although it can be a bit childish, thats kinda the point too.
Weezerfan360 Rick Mayal is my favourite comedy actor
lunamoonlight Oh for sure, he is hilarious
I made a new drawing to be posted later. It is of a girl looking at a glowing blue butterfly. I am kinda happy with it and kinda not. I can see where i have improved since trying that angle last, but at the same time i keep thinking the face is too round in some parts and it looks off, and the whole thing keeps reminding me of the "Is this a pigeon?" meme.
GemHeart IS IT A PIGEON LUNA IS IT (lol I’m sure it’s awesome :o)
lunamoonlight YES IT IS
So i have not changed my pfp on Wattpad for a while, its just a cute anime lesbian couple kissing. But i changed my cover on there from Nene Yashiro and Hanako-kun to Kappa and Siren's first kiss from Castle Swimmer. Simply because it is adorable and kinda awkward at the same time. So both pictures, plus my username, are gay.
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GemHeart Y E A H IKR
lunamoonlight Gonna do the required classes, American History and Government and I'll also do the prehistory with roman and greek stuff